Justin Kennelly
Dr. Hill
ENG 215
18 November 2012
The
Howl of the Werewolf
A
Fan Fiction of Angela Carter’s The Company of Wolves.
Darkness
has fallen upon a remote village deep within the dark forests of Germany,
robbing the land of its warmth as the wind gusts bring with it a heavy
snowfall, which threatened to entomb them in a wintry grave. Then suddenly over
the cries of the blistering winds, came a blood-curdling howl so fearsome and
melancholy, it sent a chill down the spines of even the most seasoned of
hunters. At that moment they knew they were no longer alone and that I, the
beast who terrorized these woods, striking down any who dared venture out alone
after dark, had returned.
For
generations I had terrorized this village, returning every ten years to steal every
young man and woman of marrying age and torture them mercilessly until they
literally begged me to end their wretched lives. But wait…. How rude of
me! I haven’t even introduced myself! My
name is Wilhelm Klawitter, and I am a 100-year-old werewolf. However, contrary
to popular belief I was not born a werewolf, I was a hardworking huntsman
engaged to be married to the love of my life.
Now you’re probably
wondering, if my life was going so well, how did I become a werewolf in the
first place? Well in order to understand my story you must travel back in time
with me to the winter of 1726, to the very village I now lay siege to on this
dark wintry night. I was a young 20 something hot shot, thought to be the best
huntsman by far in the entire region, and engaged to be married to the young
and beautiful Wilhelmina Barde. I had loved her with all my heart since the
very moment I had laid eyes upon her when her family resettled in our quaint
village 5 years prior when her family's estate burned to the ground in a nearby
village. From that moment forward, I did everything within my power to make her
mine, making a complete utter fool out of myself in countless foolish acts I
would prefer not to divulge, until one day I had finally won her affections, or
so I thought.
When our wedding day
came, I was standing at the altar as
the whole village piled into the tiny little church dressed in their Sunday
best waiting for the ceremony to begin. However, from the very moment I awoke
that morning I had this foreboding feeling in my heart that something was
terribly wrong. Early that morning, the sky had darkened, the temperature had
dipped well below freezing, and the snow had begun to fly. Despite the
deteriorating weather conditions and the incessant feeling that something was
quite right, I decided the wedding was to go on as planned. However, five
minutes before the ceremony was to begin, my worst fears came true as the best
man came dashing up to the altar and told me Miss. Barde was nowhere to be
found! Fearing for her safety in the steadily worsening weather conditions, I
immediately assembled a search party and we searched high and low for hours
until in utter despair my friends pleaded with me to admit she was gone and we
would continue the search for her body when the weather permitted. Heartbroken,
I staggered home with my friends who were worried about what I would do in my
grief stricken state. Once we reached my home, I told them they were welcome to
stay until the storm blew over. What happened next will forever be seared into
my mind for the rest my days. When I opened my chamber door, to fetch some
blankets for my guests, there was Wilhelmina lying in my bed with another man! Distraught,
I bolted out the door into the frigid night before she could even muster
the words to defend herself. I ran deeper and deeper into the woods until my
frozen legs were incapable of carrying me any farther. As I lay there face down
in the snow heartbroken and praying for death, a strange man appeared out of
nowhere and immediately seemed to know everything about my life.
“You disgust me! How do
you call yourself a man? I thought you were supposed to be some sort of hotshot
huntsman. But all I see here is a pathetic washed up bastard unworthy of life,
wallowing in the snow over some wench who left him at the altar for another
man! No wonder she felt the need to leave you, she needs a real man to hold and
cherish her on these cold wintry nights! However, despite your unworthiness, I
am willing to grant you the power to exact your revenge on those who have betrayed
you and make their every waking moment a living hell! However, if I grant you
this gift, you must first prove yourself worthy of it before you exact your
revenge.
Brewing with anger at
Wilhelmina for her most dishonorable betrayal and this verbal lashing from a
man I had never met before in my life, I wasted no time in delivering my
answer. “YES!”
While at that point I
was willing to do pretty much anything to exact my revenge on those who had made
such a fool out of me, I was completely unprepared for what I was about to
witness. The man started to convulse as he let a blood-curdling scream, what
used to be normal human teeth and fingernails became razor sharp fangs and
claws, which he immediately used to cleave off the skin of his human prison, revealing a muscular body, more dog than human. However, it wasn’t until I
stared into his glowing eyes that I knew the stranger was a werewolf!
When the transformation
was complete, he let looked up to the moon and let out a most forlorn howl, the
likes of which I never heard before. Between the utter disbelief of what I had
just seen and frigid temperature, I was paralyzed where I lay as he came and
over to where I lay wrestled a huge chunk out of my shoulder with his massive
fangs right as I was passing out.
When I finally came to days later, I was surprised to see my shoulder was completely intact, which led
me to believe it had been nothing more than a bad dream. That is until I turned
my head and saw him staring at me from across the cave.
“Thought it was a dream
huh? Sorry to disappoint you, but it wasn’t a dream. As far as your shoulder
goes, werewolves are quick healers and are capable of surviving wounds that
would prove fatal for a human. Now for the next year, you must dedicate
yourself to learning to live the life of a werewolf. I’m going to teach you how
to hunt, how to survive, how to adapt to your environment, and most importantly
how to control the beast inside.”
“But I thought…”
“You thought what? That
werewolves only transform during the full moon? That’s a load of crap that
mothers tell their children at bedtime, when they can’t sleep at night. In
reality, you can change at any time day or night and as a new werewolf, it will
be nearly impossible to control, but with time and my guidance, you will learn
to change back and forth on command.
And that’s exactly what
I did, for the next year, I learned the
ins and outs of being a werewolf, how to hunt, how to survive and how to keep a
low profile to keep the angry villagers from finding and killing me when I was
at my weakest right after the full moon.
By now, winter had
once again graced the dark forests of Germany and it was about a week away from
the anniversary of my becoming a werewolf, when my master told me he had taught
me everything I needed to know about being a werewolf, and now to officially
graduate I was to do what I had been waiting so long for, I was to stalk and
kill Wilhelmina and the bastard who stole her from me. With that said, my master
took off into the woods and I was never to see him again.
Immediately I set out
for the village, anxious to exact my revenge! For four days after I reached the
village I observed from a distance, seeing that in my absence she had married
the man I’d caught her with the year before and she had borne him a son. What
irked me the most however was the rest of the village had just as soon
forgotten about my existence and openly accepted her and her family into their
little community. No matter, they would feel my wrath soon enough, but for now,
I set my sights on Wilhelmina and her happy little family. On the fifth night,
I quietly snuck into the nursery and snatched their young son and ran off with
him into the forest, where I enjoyed consuming the little boy’s body, not a big
meal but the feeling of exhilaration I got listening to their screams when they
discovered their baby's severed head lying next them more than made up for it!
The next night after the young grieving parents had gone to bed once their babies
remains had been interred in the local cemetery, I returned to their house and
kidnapped her dear husband as he slept and dragged him to the forest where his
screams rang like music in my ears as I dismembering him piece by piece and
left the pieces scattered around the house for his darling wife to find the
next morning. Having robbed her of her family, she finally snapped and sat in a
corner rocking herself back and forth until the next night, the anniversary of
her betrayal, when I paid her a visit in human form. Oh, how I loved the sheer look
of terror that ran across her face when I finally transformed in front of her.
“PLEASE… PLEASE, you’ve
already taken everyone I love away from me! Have Mercy!”
I stared deep into her
eyes and told her, “You should have thought about that before you left me at
the altar to jump in the sack with your now deceased husband! Now you can go
join your family and burn in hell!” With that, I tortured her until sunrise at,
which point she finally succumbed to her wounds and I had consumed her
entirely, after which I plotted my revenge for the village that had taken in
the little harlot and her illegitimate family.
On that night, I
decided from here on out, every ten years I would return to the village and
slaughter every man and woman old enough to partake in the bonds of holy
matrimony. And this was how it was for the next 79 years, I would return on the
anniversary of Wilhelmina’s betrayal kill all who were old enough to marry,
before they had the chance to engage in the same treachery I had been subject
to and then leave before the remaining villagers had the chance to track me
down and kill me. However, when I returned for the decennial slaughter in 1806,
I came across a young woman now known to the world as Little Red Riding Hood.
Her parents had been stupid enough to allow her to go wandering alone in the
woods, knowing perfectly well that the decennial was upon them, so I stalked
her for a while through the woods waiting for the perfect moment to strike.
After about an hour of trailing her, I had had plenty of opportunities to
dispatch her, but something about her kept me from doing so. Therefore, I
decided I needed to get a closer look so I shifted back into my human form and
presented myself as the young huntsman I once was. When introduced myself,
there was something in her eye that almost immediately calmed the inner beast.
Captivated by this strange spell she seemed to have over me I decided to gain
her trust and walk along with her, while I tried to figure out what was wrong
with me. After a while, I devised a plan that would finally allow me to kill
her and continue on with my mission. I had found out she was on her way to her grandmother’s house, so I made a bet
with her I could make it there she could knowing full well that with my
werewolf abilities it would be no contest. Once there I would kill her
grandmother, not my usual target but hey, it would be an appetizer for the main
course, and enraged she would try to kill me forcing me to respond in kind.
My plan went off without
a hitch, until Red arrived. Instead of the murderous rampage I expected, she
started stripping down to her bare skin! What in the world was she doing?
Didn’t she know what I was and that I was here to kill her? But one look into
her eyes and I knew I was never going to be able to kill her, and that despite
everything I’d done to her she had for one reason or another accepted me for
me!
Now most assume that I
simply ate her and went on with my life, but I will tell you right now that is
not what happened. As I stood there staring into her eyes, part of my icy heart
thawed just enough to realize that maybe there was enough room in my heart for a
companion to accompany me through my eternal life. Therefore, in a completely unexpected
turn of events, I made her a werewolf and she has been at my side ever since, feeding
on passersby brave enough to wander the woods alone and every ten years joining
me in my ongoing vengeance against the village where it all began.
This story was so full of suspense it seeemd beter than the original. The part I found most creative was the story was in first person, it was much different than a simple narritive. The first person provided what the werewolf was thinking and why, which added a new demension to the story. The story line alone modernized the story and made it more interesting. Overall the story was one of the best, it took a childrens story and made it appeasing for older readers.
ReplyDeleteThis story was a really good change of perspective while keeping the original story in tact. I did a similar thing with mine too. Like the comment above me already said, ur story was suspenseful and very well put together
ReplyDeleteThis Story was amazing! I loved how it was told in 1st person and the ending was so unexpected! Good job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with all the above comments, Justin. This is a very well written, not to mention gory, response to the story, with a surprising ending. I'm very impressed by how you appear to have picked up on Angela Carter's archaic language and created a somewhat similar style. Nice!
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